I didnt like this song very much. Escpecialy the sound of lead and main melody. I am very into house, but this doesnt sound like house. By the way, your Hi hats are too loud, cymbals are suposed to make a background of song, not to be louder then kick or clap you used.
Intro is ok, ending as well.
I must say I liked the intro beat, but it is not mastered very well-
Anyway, you made pretty good job here, and if it get 700+ view, then some people must like it ;)
-Norato