1) NEED MOAR power, make a roll for the 0:16, reversed crash, crash at drop, master filter cut, there is tons of ways how to make a drop
2) I love progressive house, I also kinda like your off lead, main melody can be better, and next time, use Reverb and Delay on melody ;-) it will make it sound much much better, beleave me
3) Turn up the melody and offlead volume
- Overal, the song is very nice, and extremly chill out, it also doesnt get boring very fast.
* I am not going to rate it becouse its not worth 5/5 and I dont want to ruin your score by 4/5 rate. If you want to respond on this, please send me a copy of your respond to my messages.